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Julie

Julie
by Danielle


Rating: G
Comments: Please
Summary: Response to challenge #6.

Challenge Week Challenge #6

Its similar to one of the previous challenges. Before, I asked you to use certain words at the beginning of sentences. This time you have to use certain words at the END of the sentences.
For example.
fire.
it.
fear.
Would work like....
Murdock looked around and saw the fire.
It was engulfing the house quickly taking everything with it.
When Murdock caught his own reflection and saw only fear.
Make sense? good :) Here's the list of words that are to finish a sentence. Remember, do not worry about 'making' a story. Think of this as a passage from a 'bigger' story. Every sentence must have the words listed below, in the same order, at the end of each sentence. Do not have extra long sentences - keep to grammer rules :)
Here ya go...
quickly.
said.
moving.
warehouse.
ordered.
it.
fight.
Murdock.
message.
again.
in.
Face.
closer.
day.

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Julie

 

The beginning came quickly. This will halt your life, the others had
said. Now that it had actually happened, he felt like his life was
finally moving. It had all started in the warehouse. Hannibal had told
him to look after the girl, Sarah, and he did what he was ordered.
Looking back at the romance that started shortly after that, he never
would have expected it.

Sometimes, well, lots of the time, they would fight. He would leave
and console himself by spending time with Murdock. But before long, he
would find himself at the door of the apartment they shared, walking
in.

Then one day she said she was pregnant and didn't want the baby or her
life with Face. So he gave up and shoved them both away until the day he
saw his daughter being born and realized that all he wanted was the draw
her closer. Now as he held his daughter close and listened to her
uncles plan a new venture, Face smiled, enjoying the beauty of the day.

 

 


Julie by Danielle

 

 


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