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Undetectable

By: Junkfoodmonkey

 

Rating: G

Summary: Double Drabble. Just something odd Murdock's noticed.

Disclaimer: I don't own the A-Team, I don't make any money from this.

 

 

Undetectable

 

I take a nap in the living room and everyone is kind and considerate, staying quiet as they pass by. But I'm not asleep yet and I always know who's passing, from the smell of them. Like the VC could smell us in the jungle.

 

The colonel of course smells like cigars. The big guy gives off an honest hard-work smell of motor oil and a hint of metal polish. Face is all soap, subtle, expensive cologne, and breath mints, because The Smile doesn't only look good. Frankie is cologne too, but less expensive, less subtle and mixed with that stuff he puts on his hair. Carla. I get a waft of sweet perfume when she goes by. Nice.

 

I hear someone and I have to open my eyes, because I don't know who it is. Stockwell.

 

He never smells of anything, which is weird. I've stood real close to him before, just to freak him out, because that never gets old. And there's nothing. No tobacco, no garlic, no cologne. He's taken the art of vanishing to new levels. It's as if he's not there, not real.

 

Sometimes I wonder if this whole damn thing is just a dream.

 

 

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Undetectable by Junkfoodmonkey

 

 


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